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  • Title: The Virgin Submissive
  • Author: Sleepyfur
  • ISBN: -
  • Page: 388
  • Format: ebook
  • Dear Author,It happened the third day of school My new roommate turned to me and said, I want you to kneel for me He didn t ask, or joke, or explain He just smiled like he knew exactly what would happen And I I obeyed, dropped down to my knees before I even thought about what I was doing I d never done anything like that before, for anyone It didn t seem like suchDear Author,It happened the third day of school My new roommate turned to me and said, I want you to kneel for me He didn t ask, or joke, or explain He just smiled like he knew exactly what would happen And I I obeyed, dropped down to my knees before I even thought about what I was doing I d never done anything like that before, for anyone It didn t seem like such a big deal It wasn t a big deal at least it didn t have to be, did it And maybe it wouldn t have been except I didn t understand why I obeyed.I didn t understand that saying yes that first time meant that when he asked the next day that I take my shirt off, I wouldn t say no to that either.Or the next day when he ordered me to lie still while he tied me to the bed Photo Description A young man lies on a bed with his hands bound behind his back with rope while another man perches above him The bound man s shirt lies open and his expression shows he is nervous and maybe slightly afraid The man on top looks like the cat who got the cream and is clearly turned on and ready to do sinful things.This story was written as a part of the M M Romance Group s Love is an Open Road event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story This story may contain sexually explicit content and is intended for adult readers It may contain content that is disagreeable or distressing to some readers The M M Romance Group strongly recommends that each reader review the General Information section before each story for story tags as well as for content warnings.
    The Virgin Submissive Dear Author It happened the third day of school My new roommate turned to me and said I want you to kneel for me He didn t ask or joke or explain He just smiled like he knew exactly what would happ

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    1. 1.5 starsOnce upon a time there was a boy named Ana Alex who was shy and lacked confidence At 14, he told his best friend he was gay, and was bullied so badly he had to be homeschooled For the next 4 years he hid at home with no contact from anyone other than family nannies.Then one day, he attended college On his first day in his new dorm room, he got curious while waiting to meet his new roommate So he did what any shy, young boy would do, and rummaged through a locked chest belonging to his m [...]

    2. So this was my prompt so admittedly I m a bit partial, but I had so much fun reading this story, which ended up going in directions I didn t expect totally sweet fantasy about a shy college boy falling in love with his sexily domineering but also protective roommate, with a nice dash of kink to steam things up Many thanks to the author for doing a great job with the prompt and to the organizers for all their work making this amazing event happen.

    3. While this story may seem cute on the surface, I had some issues at a deeper level First, the BDSM aspects don t seem realistic Nate seems a older than he s supposed to be, which may be explained by his upbringing, and b seems to not have much of an idea what being a Dom means His commandeering nature notwithstanding, I found it difficult to believe that he s serious about his role, when he takes a sheltered virgin to his bed, and basically tells him This is what I need, or we can t be lovers , [...]

    4. No discussion about the lifestyle, what to expect, limits, or a safe word knife play without a safe word Seriously Alex didn t even know what he was getting into, him having grown up all sheltered and home schooled Nate came over older than he was, a college kid of his age can t be the experienced Dom he s portrayed to be The whole thing read like Nate taking advantage of Alex inexperience to get what he wanted, it was insta love and wannabe BDSMI had a lot of problems with the story, it reminde [...]

    5. The Virgin Submissive by Sleepyfur is a product of the M M Romance Group s Love is an Open Road event.Alex Landon just moved into his new room His new roommate was nowhere in sight and they were yet to meet Very curious to what the guy was like Alex began snooping around the mystery man s things that were already unpacked He found a chest inside the wardrobe with a knife, ropes, metal cuffs, and other things that made him feel afraid at first He was caught by Nate Moore, who suddenly appeared, a [...]

    6. 3.5 starsWhat I liked Nate is like a force of nature He s so dominant and possessive Although Alex is natural submissive, he s trying to stand up for himself view spoiler What I disliked I m having hard time believing that they re in college Knife play Without a consent or a safe word it would be very creepy Sometimes there s a line that reminded me of FSoG or Twilight Not a great moment Insta love I know with BDSM lifestyle that kind of thing could be really intense But I still think it s too f [...]

    7. Bummer I was stoked for this one, but I can t buy college kids saying or doing these things It all felt like a skintight polyester suit circa 1970 No one wears that on purpose Struck me as farcical with little to nothing to do with BDSM, but I can be kinda fussy about kinky reads.

    8. Thanks to the author for the effort and participating in this event and offering this freebie.I only have one thing to say about this story, that it felt like reading the college gay short story version of Fifty Shades of Grey but without the darkness and added mystery, and with better writing.

    9. I thought this was a sweet and kinky little read Providing you don t take this too seriously and just enjoy it as a bit of fun, the two MC s are likeable and their budding relationship is endearing Alex cried a bit much for my liking but apart from that I really enjoyed it.

    10. Alex and Nate fall in love very quickly They are roomed together as they start college and Alex is snooping through Nate s stuff and finds a chest of sexual toys or maybe a murder chest Alex isn t to certain Nate wants complete control and Alex is a brat who really wants Nate just as much as Nate wants him Though they are the same age, Nate is comes across as older I was happy with the epilogue.

    11. This is a coming of age first love and maybe only love story Nate quickly takes charge and has to bring Alex along Alex has a lot to learn in college and not all it will happen in class I love the characters and am routing for them.

    12. Sorry, this was too unrealistic for me and had a few too many romance tropes and clich s and contradictions cramped in one short story Promising writing style though.

    13. Offered for FREE from the M M Romance Group s Love Is An Open Road event Thank you too all the amazing authors who participated 2.5 stars This is a matter of close, but no cigar I love the premise, as the roommate trope is one of my favorites, especially with a BDSM twist like in the phenomenal The Roommate Situation by Zoe X Rider Unfortunately, this didn t work for me for a few reasons.1 Insta Insta I don t always hate insta love, but it needs to be justified Before Alex had said 5 words to Na [...]

    14. This actually rates about 1.5 stars But it doesn t deserve 2 stars.I felt completely pulled away from the story There was little to no characterisation for Alex and Nate No psychological explanation why Nate enjoyed BDSM Alex just went along with it, without first discussing or at least thinking whether he liked or wanted to experiment BDSM I failed to understand Nate s protective streak, opening doors and carrying Alex in his arms Was Alex in fact 5 years old Never mind, that would lead to pedo [...]

    15. Nate and Alex meet as college roommates Alex s father is a distant presence in his life When he came out, he lost his best friend and was physically beaten Alex is lost, alone and lonely Nate has helped his mother and provided emotional support when his dad left the family He is also very young dominant who knows what he wants Nate and Alex are in need of love and each other.Because this is a short story, the I love yous happen quickly I really liked the writer s style The words flowed smoothing [...]

    16. Hmm How to review thisThe story was definitely entertaining There s a lot of promise for a first story from a new author For college students around the same age, the Dom Nate doesn t strike me as a college kid Eventhough he s a dom, there should be some sense that he s a young man, but the personality depicted here isn t of a college student The BDSM theme is fairly superficially explored in this story The way Alex and Nate interact also strikes me as unrealistic The dialogue and behaviors of t [...]

    17. As I said in the group this was a really sweet, entertaining short story with a different bdsm setting And the author was kind enough to say that she he will write an extended epilogue which is awesome IMO Can t wait

    18. Nice interpretation of the photo and the story letter Thank you Sleepyfur for donating your story, your time and your talent.

    19. I like light BDSM so this book was perfect for me It had all my favorites virgins, light BDSM, alpha males, and a sweet ending This book was well written and made for the perfect afternoon read.

    20. insta love BDSM dropped on a virgin out of nowhere without any kind of discussion everything happens in a bunch of days and they re already at the L word no just no which is sad, because it wasn t badly written the words were fine, the problem was what they were saying

    21. Fun and fluffy This has some BDSM that is refuses to take to seriously and has happy cute characters.Perhaps it is a bit insta love Or very insta love And it is very short But cute fluffy fun.

    22. 2.5 starsIt s nothing personal, but I m generally not a fan of instalove, and in this case it was just a little too much and didn t fit, so I just can t rate it any higher.The time span for me was just way too short to be in any way believable.

    23. The writing could have used editing, and the style of it was super juvenile I wasn t digging the knife play.

    24. It was alright I just didn t think their was enough girth in the book to really feel the connection between them.

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